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Essays

You will write two longer essays in this course. The first, worth 20% of the final grade, is due at the beginning of tutorial on Friday, 20 June. The second, worth 30% of the final grade, is due no later than 9:30 am Friday, 1 August in AQ 6230. If you hand in your second essay on Wednesday, 30 July, I will do my best to evaluate it and return it to you on 1 August at 9:30 in AQ 6230. You must follow the Requirements for Written Assignments below. Use it as a check-list before submitting your essays.

First Essay (1500-2000 words)

You will write a critical evaluation of either Merry E. Wiesner, Women and Gender in Early Modern Europe or Lyndal Roper, Witch Craze: Terror and Fantasy in Baroque Germany.

Your evaluation must take into consideration two book reviews published in academic journals found in the SFU library. Avoid popular journals such as History Today. Concentrate on reviews that devote substantial and meaningful attention to the book that you have chosen. You may find a review of the book embedded in a discussion of a series of books on a common theme. The easiest way to find book reviews is through the Humanities and Social Sciences Index database available via the SFU Library Home Page.

A critical evaluation is a response or reaction, based on intelligent judgment, to a piece of writing. It is not a summary of the contents of a book. Essays that limit themselves to a summary of the chosen book will not fulfill the requirement of the assignment and will earn a grade of C or less.

As you prepare your essay, ask yourself questions such as: What are the strengths and/or weaknesses of the book? Does the book have a thesis? What is it and how well does the author prove it? Does the author provide convincing evidence or a compelling analysis of relevant primary and/or secondary sources? Do you think the book makes an important contribution to its subject? Why or why not?

Your essential evaluation of the book should be your argument, the basic point you wish to prove. State your argument in the introduction of your essay and devote your essay to proving the argument through an analysis of the book as well as of the book reviews. One appropriate approach is to consider one central theme in your essay, a theme that will provide your essay with conceptual unity. A "scatter-gun" approach of making several observations that are at best tenuously linked will likely not produce a successful essay. Please note that a critical evaluation is not necessarily a negative evaluation.

Your essay should avoid banalities. Do not comment on minor problems, such as typographical errors, or on standard expectations of published historical monographs, e.g. do not praise the book for its bibliography. Historians are supposed to base their books on thorough research. Only when they neglect this duty ought we to comment.

Furthermore, refrain from caviling at writing style. You may presume that your chosen author writes grammatically correct and thus intelligible sentences. If you do not understand any words he uses, look up their meaning in a dictionary. Do not fault an author for their wide-ranging vocabulary or for their intellectual sophistication. Anti-intellectualism has no place in critical evaluations, which are exercises of the application of reason and intellect.

How to incorporate the book reviews into your essay: Read the reviews carefully. Are they critical evaluations or merely summaries of the book? If they do make judgments, what do they praise and/or criticize about the book. Do they evaluate substantive matters or matters of secondary importance? On what grounds do they praise and/or criticize the book? Do you agree with the evaluations in the reviews? Why or why not?

Second Essay (2000 words)

This essay will chiefly function as an analysis of primary sources to prove a specific argument about female identity in the context of the querelle des femmes. You must use at least four printed primary sources. That means no electronic sources. At least one of these sources must be external to the required readings for the course. All primary sources must be written between 1400 and 1800 and must be relevant to the theme of the course. At least two of the sources must be written by a woman. You may use printed secondary sources to provide historical context or as supports or foils for your argument. You may not use secondary sources as substitutes for your own historical reasoning; your essay should not be an exercise in repeating or summarizing the views of other scholars. The objective of the assignment is for you to formulate and prove your own historical argument based on your own reading of primary sources. Essays that lack a clear argument and/or do not provide a substantial analysis of primary sources will not receive a grade higher than C. They may earn a grade less than C. You must document your essay with footnotes/endnotes and a bibliography in accordance with the most recent edition of The Chicago Manual of Style. Marks will be deducted for deficiencies in footnote/endnote or bibliographical form.

Requirements for Written Assignments

  • Essays sent by electronic attachment will not be accepted.

  • All essays must be typed, paginated, and double-spaced with all margins set at one inch.

  • Use a twelve-point font for the entire essay, including footnotes / endnotes.

  • Provide a title page with your own title and include your e-mail address on the title page in case I need to contact you.

  • Staple your essay together. No paper clips please!

  • Do not exceed the word limit assigned to each essay assignment. I will not read beyond what you are required to write.

  • On the title page or at the end of your essay, provide the precise word count of the essay, not including footnotes/endnotes and bibliography. For MS Word, select the entire text of the essay, click on Tools, then Word Count. Provide the figure given.

  • When citing your sources, supply footnotes or a separate page (or separate pages) for endnotes. In the first essay you may cite direct quotes from or references to the book in question by indicating page numbers in brackets within your own text, but supply a footnote or endnote that provides publication details at the first reference. You must supply footnote or endnote references for the book reviews. Do not forget to cite your source precisely! Failure to do so constitutes plagiarism. Document references in the second essay only with footnotes or endnotes. Supply a bibliography for the first and second essay.

  • For all matters of style, including the correct format for footnotes and bibliography, please consult the most recent editions of The Chicago Manual of Style. For help with style, see also William Strunk, Jr. The Elements of Style. Examples of footnote and bibliographical form required for this course may be found here.

  • Superior essays will be written with correct grammar and idiomatic usage. Above all, they will (1) directly address the relevant question and (2) will be based on an articulate thesis statement, presented in the introduction, that is (3) sustained with logical consistency and by compelling evidence taken from the relevant sources in the form of quotations and/or specific references.

  • Your written work should be the organized and intelligible record of your own thinking about a particular problem. Avoid stringing together the ideas of others, and especially avoid plagiarism, the unacknowledged use of the words or ideas of another author. For more information on plagiarism point your internet browser here. This site links to the SFU Library plagiarism tutorial. In 2005, I came across at least three papers in which students had used without acknowledgement material from printed or internet sources. Every paper received an F. Every paper marred by plagiarism deserves an F. I am an expert at detecting plagiarism. Do not plagiarize!

  • Avoid the most common stylistic problems of undergraduate essays: Aim to express your ideas clearly and concisely. Write in complete, grammatically correct sentences. Do not use colloquial language or contractions. Avoid dangling participles, convoluted, run-on sentences, and one- or two-sentence paragraphs. Wherever possible use the active voice, not the passive voice. (If you do not know what these terms mean, find out!) Know what words mean before you use them. Consult a dictionary regularly to help you use and spell words correctly. Use authoritative dictionaries, e.g. the various Oxford dictionaries. Avoid internet dictionaries. Do not rely on spell-check programs. Proofread your essays.

  • Use your sources correctly. All page references must be accurate. Quote accurately and do not misrepresent your sources. Adapt your prose to quotations from your sources, not vice versa. Do not quote fragments that make no grammatical sense. Do not alter the text of your source when quoting from it by replacing words in or adding words to the text. Provide a context for your quotations so that they make sense to your readers. Do not expect your readers to guess the connection between a quotation and an argument you wish to make.

  • Do not hand in assignments late. An assignment is late when it is submitted after the beginning of class on the day that it is due. A penalty of 3% per day will be deducted from late assignments, and I reserve the right simply to provide grades without comments on these.

  • I will gladly allow for extensions for the first essay without penalty but only if you have a significant and urgent reason for not handing in the paper on time (e.g. illness, family tragedy) and if you speak with me before the deadline for submission. As a rule, e-mail requests for extensions will not be considered.

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