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Essays are due at the lecture on Monday, 24 November. They should be 1500 words long, typed and double-spaced. Use a twelve-point font. Provide a title page with your own title, leave some space in the margins for comments, and staple your essay together. Essays sent by electronic attachment will not be accepted. Choose one of the six topics below.

Follow the most recent edition of The Chicago Manual of Style (available in the library's reference collection) or of Kate L. Turabian's Manual for Writers of Term Papers, Theses, and Dissertations in all matters of style, especially when it comes to the proper way of listing footnotes or of putting together your bibliography. For help with writing style, see also William Strunk, Jr., The Elements of Style.

  • Tips for writing essays
  • Guidelines for Historical Essays, Department of History and Classics, Univesity of Alberta

    No extensions will be permitted except for medical reasons that must be supported by a note from a physician. Late papers will receive a mark of 0. Requests for extensions must be directed in person either to Dr Craig or to Dr Pabel before the due date. E-mail requests will not be considered.

    Superior essays will
    (1) begin with an argument, a clear answer to the essay question,
    (2) present a close and careful analysis of the relevant source in order to provide compelling and convincing evidence in support of your answer,
    (3) accurately represent the relevant source and supply correct page numbers for quotations from or direct references to the source, and
    (4) be written in a clear style with correct grammar.

    Please note: The essay is not a research assignment. Do not use sources (from libraries or on the internet) outside the readings for History 105. Focus on the primary sources: The Song of Roland, The Prince, The Obedience of a Christian Man.

    1. Roland proclaims: "The pagans are wrong and the Christians are right" (p. 61). Is the fundamental conflict in the Song of Roland a religious one? Why or why not? If not, explain what in your opinion is the main conflict in the Song of Roland. Base your answer exclusively on your reading of the Song of Roland.

    Begin your essay by stating your answer and by briefly explaining its validity. Thus if you think the conflict is fundametally a religious one, explain why. If you do not think the conflict is religious, state this clearly, identify the conflict, and explain why it, and not a religious conflict, is the principal conflict in the Song of Roland. Analyze your primary source in support of your answer, i.e. your agrument.

    2. What, in your opinion, is the most important element in the military ethos of the Middle Ages? Base your answer exclusively on your reading of the Song of Roland.

    Begin by identifying and briefly explaining the significance of that element of the military ethos that will serve as the focus of your paper. Develop your answer through an analysis of theSong of Roland.

    3. How would Machiavelli rate as a ruler the Charlemagne we encounter in the Song of Roland? Base your answer exclusively on your reading of the Song of Roland and The Prince.

    Before you begin to write, consider the main points of advice on political and military affairs that Machiavelli provides in The Prince. Then ask yourself how close does Charlemagne as portrayed in The Song of Roland come to ruling in accordance with the principles established by Machiavelli. In your essay, begin by stating your answer and by briefly explaining it. Then proceed with an analysis of the two primary sources to prove your answer, i.e. your agrument. Devote roughly equal space to both sources. Ratings could include "successful," "effective," "ineffective." Can you think of other examples of ratings?

    4. In Civilization in the West, we read: "Humanism developed in reaction to the intellectual world that was centred on the Church and dominated by otherworldly concerns. Humanism was secular in outlook, though by no means was it antireligious" (p. 350). Do you think this statement applies to The Prince? Why or why not?

    The question asks you to think about a particular interpretation of humanism and its applicability to The Prince. Your essay should demonstrate a deeper, more detailed knowledge of humanism than is contained in the quotation from the textbook. That does not (necessarily) mean a concept of humanism that contradicts the quote; it simply means a more elaborate knowledge of humanism than a brief statement about the nature of humanism. Your focus, of course, should be on The Prince and to what extent the interpretation matches what you read in Machiavelli's book.

    5. Was the Protestant Reformation a social and religious revolution? Base your answer exclusively on your reading of The Obedience of a Christian Man.

    Begin your essay by stating your answer and by briefly explaining what social and religious revolution would mean in the context of the sixteenth century. (You do not need to quote a dictionary definition.) In the body of your essay, show whether or not Tyndale's book suggests that the Reformation was revolutionary. Consider his concept of obedience.

    6. Would Tyndale agree with Machiavelli's concept of political authority? Base your answer exclusively on your reading of The Prince and The Obedience of a Christian Man.

    This essay requires a comparison of the two sources mentioned in the question. Begin your essay with an answer to the question that states concisely why or why not Tyndale would agree with Machiavelli. In the body of your essay, analyze the two sources in support of your answer, i.e. your argument. Devote roughly equal space to both sources.

    Some tips for writing essay answers

    1. Carefully read the question that you choose to answer. Make sure you understand what it requires of you.

    2. Answer only the essay question that you have chosen. Do not digress and write your essay on another topic.

    3. Provide a clear answer to the question at the beginning of your essay. Your answer will be your thesis or argument.

    4. Be consisent in maintaining your thesis throughout the essay. Do not contradict yourself.

    5. Support your thesis with convincing and compelling evidence taken from your source(s).

    6. The way you read your source(s) is utlimately a matter of interpretation, but you must never misrepresent or misquote your source(s). In other words, you must not make your source say what it does not say. Misrepresentation of a source is a serious error and constitutes a form of intellectual dishonesty.

    7. When you quote from a source, provide the relevant context for the quotation so that your reader can understand the quotation's significance. If you use a quotation to illustrate a point, make sure that the quotation actually is relevant to the point you are making. Avoid stringing quotes together. Do not quote fragments that, on their own, make no grammatical sense. When quoting, do not alter the text of your source in any way by, for example, adding or leaving out words or changing the tense of the verb(s). When quoting from a source, adapt your own prose to the quotation, not vice versa.

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