“Proper words in proper places, make the true definition of a style”

(Swift, Letter 9 January 1720)

 

A Modest Proposal

      Swift grew up in a period of extreme political and religious unrest

      Swift gains religious position in Ireland

      intellectual climate of the time favoured the rational, the new science (Newton, Boyle), the new philosophy

      Literature favours simplicity, clarity, wit; tends to be critical of society

      Asked you to consider:

              who is the audience?

              what is the message?

              what is the form of the message?, why?

              what is the writing style?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

      focus on message and style

      Swift is of English descent living in Ireland

      Irish are considered by the English to be barbaric, poor, uneducated and Catholic

      Anglo-Irish are part of the ruling class and Protestant, particularly Anglican

      own many of the large properties in Ireland

      often absentee landlords, leaving their estate in hands of an overseer

      For Swift, to be sent to Ireland, even as the Dean of St. Patrick’s, was to be sent into exile, away from intellectual, religious and political centre of London

 

Title

      short version suggests the giving of a humble opinion (at least at first glance; we read the title differently once we are familiar with the piece)

      conveys to the reader the need for a corrective to social conditions

      children of the poor are a burden to their parents and their country

 

 

 

 

 

First paragraph gives Swift’s arguments:

        Upsetting to see women begging on the streets, often with numerous children

        Women are unable to work since they are occupied with begging

        Children resort to thievery, fighting for the Pretender (treason), sell themselves as indentured servants on plantations in colonies

        Implies that the reader is not one of the destitute

        Two sentences provide the basis of the argument of the proposal

 

Second paragraph provides a more detailed view of the argument or thesis:

      the situation is deplorable

      Someone should find a solution to make the children useful members of the society

      Such a person would preserve the nation

      Such a person would deserve fame and long-term admiration

 

Swift’s plan is actually more comprehensive in scope

      Proposes to include not only infants of beggars, but all infants whose parents cannot support them

      Gives credentials: his lengthy consideration of the situation, his study of schemes of others, which he finds flawed

      Provides concrete example; note the use of the language of animal husbandry: the infant is referred to as “child,” a term that implies their humanity

      the mother of the child, however, is referred to as “dam,” a term reserved for four footed, female animals

      We begin to feel a certain unease at this point in the essay

 

Swift undertakes a cost-benefit analysis – assuming child is fed by breast milk for the first year, then:

      The only cost to the mother during that time is the amount of food required to sustain her

      This amount of food can be acquired by begging

      Returns to language of social reform;

      Proposes to provide for the child such that it will contribute to the wellbeing “of many thousands” 

      Additionally, his plan has the advantage of preventing voluntary abortions, murder of illegitimate children which single women cannot afford to feed

 

Returns to language of animal husbandry mixed with mathematical calculation

      We’re uncomfortable because it reduces people to the status of objects that are enumerated and valued for their end use

      estimates 1,500,000 people in Ireland,  200,000 of which are female ‘breeders’      

     200,000 female breeders

 -      30,000 who can afford their children

     170,000 breeders

     -50,000 who lose children

     120,000 children from poor parents

 

The problem, then is the 120,000 children who lack food, clothing, shelter

            previous methods have not worked

            infants can’t be employed in handicraft or agriculture

            infants can’t survive successfully on theft until they are 6 years old; mere probationers

            child younger than 12 is not salable

            when sold, yield £3 - £3 ½; cost of maintaining then is ~£12 – 14, creating a deficit

 

His solution

      a healthy, well-fed one-year old child is “most delicious, nourishing, and wholesome food”

      returns to calculations: set aside 20,000 as breeders, of which 5,000 will be male

      allows the increase and sustainability of the ‘herd’

      sell the remaining 100,000 for food:

 

 

“A child will make two dishes at an entertainment for friends; and when the family dines alone, the fore or hind quarter will make a reasonable dish, and seasoned with a little pepper or salt will be very good boiled on the fourth day, especially in winter”(2176).

      newborn weights 12 pounds and can be expected to more than double his or her weight before sale

“I grant this food will be somewhat dear, and therefore very proper for landlords, who, as they have already devoured most of the parents, seem to have the best title to the children” (2176).

            In this statement, he critiques the Anglo-Irish landlords who deplete Ireland of resources and impoverish and exploit the Irish Catholics

            literalizes the metaphor: since the landlords have ‘devoured’ the Irish parents by exploiotng them as cheap labour, they might as well literally eat the children, thereby solving the social problem

            we recognize at this point that we are reading satire

 

Satire – censure or ridicule deviations from a norm; often mingles laughter and anger; utilizes irony and wit

      “Satire is a glass wherein beholders do generally discover everybody’s face but their own, which is the chief reason for that kind of reception it meets in the world, and that so very few are offended with it”  (Swift, The Battle of the Books)

      The second half of the 17th century seen as high point in use of satire; writers sought to preserve existing culture by pointing out examples of deviation from it.

 

Parody – imitation with the intention to ridicule

            Swift is parodying the style of the political economist or projector

            not the first to recognize the problem of poverty in Ireland

            For example, 1690, Sir William Petty argued that the solution was to transport 1,000,000 Irish to England and the 300,000 remaining look after the cattle and milk cows.

            Petty’s argument is monetary, using the sort of calculations that Swift later parodies

            Petty calculates the cost and length of time it will take to send the Irish to England by ship (five years)

            Petty gives no thought in his Treatise to the lives of the Irish, the separation of families; he sees them as property of England

            Ultimate objective the union of Ireland and England, as has already transpired in the union of Scotland and England; dilution of Catholics into Anglican population

 

Further advantages of Swift’s proposal:

In addition to the providing food for the wealthy, eating babies will reduce the number of Catholics

Overseer or squire will become benevolent as he has access to good ‘meat’

the mother of the baby will make a net profit of 8s

the skin will make good leather for gloves and boots

increase work for butchers

 

notes a modification to the plan where the bodies of adolescents to replace deer (venison) which have been depleted from the forest by poachers and overhunting,

he rejects the modification because male flesh is tought and the keeping the females alive as breeder would increase the ‘herd’ and hence the ‘profits’

note that his rejection is based strictly on arguments of ‘practicality’ rather than humane ones

 

Reiterates the advantages of his proposal:

            reduce the number of Catholics

            reduce risk of Pretender taking the Crown

            make money to pay the landlord’s rent, since their farmed produce is seized by the landlord

            nation’s coffers increased

            new gourmet opportunities

            parents will be free of looking after children after one year

            taverns will be renown for the preparation of the food

            encourage marriage and increase mother’s attention to infants since profit is at hand

            husbands would be kinder to their pregnant wives

Irony – where what is said is the opposite of what is meant; contrasts reality with appearances; provides commentary, may be used to mock or scorn, to draw attention to inequities or hypocrisies

As we realize the full import of Swift’s solution that his “Modest” proposal is meant ironically; his solution is quite drastic

 

Style of the argument

      use of logic rather than sentiment

      economics rather than social considerations; reliance on the ‘bottom line’

      use of mathematics to justify course of action

      identification of a social problem;

      situation is problem because it causes ‘melancholy’ in observers (ie. well-off)

      may increase crime (theft, treason)

      society loses potential labour force and productive work

      solution will benefit greater good

      no consideration has been given to the poor, to the lives of the children

      use of satire, parody and irony to mock existing situation with laughter and thinly disguised rage in order to effect a change

      critique of logic, science, mathematics as means of dealing with human problems

      assumption of a moral position

 

 

 

 

18th century English Currency

Farthing

= 1/4 penny

Half penny

= 1/2 penny

Penny

= basic monetary unit

Twopence

= 2 pence

Threepence

= 3 pence

Fourpence

= 4 pence

Sixpence

= 6 pence

Shilling

= 12 pence = 1s

Half crown

= 30 pence = 2s 6d

Crown

= 60 pence = 5s

Half guinea

= 126 pence = 10s 6d

Guinea

= 252 pence = 21s = £1 1s

Two Guineas

= 504 pence = 42s = £2 2s

Five Guineas

= 1260 pence = 100s = £5 5s

 

       

       

       

       

       

       

       

       

       

       

       

       

       

      The worth of coin determined by weight of gold or silver it contained

      £ - abbreviation for Libra      Latin for ‘pounds’

      Average income probably less than £ 20; member of working class may have had an annual salary of about 40 s