"My Short Story"
1) This story is written by James Stewart in June 02,2007
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The title of this sotry is: Depression, but I would like to change it to "running away from self
2) There is only one main character in this story. Basically this story is all about the feeling of a girl how is depress. I tried to pick some of the most important feelings that bother her. For example , feeling of loneliness, weakness, and not being able to face what really bothers her.
3)I need at least three places to click my photos. The ones which are the most important are bedroom with window and table, banister and washroom with bathtub. Each different scene will help the audience to get connected to the feeling of the girl.
4) The main actions: Holding head in her hands while she’s thinking of her problems, creeping on the floor , cutting hand with a razor in bathroom when she finds herself so weak
5)Introduction a) why! b) Slow c) lost
Complication a) sympathetic b) medium c) tired
Climax a) sad b) fast c) crazy
Closure a)thinking b)slow c)relax