6) They need to know that this girl is depressed, so some key sentence is require
to across the point through audience.
-I do not simply speak of the pounding gale outside
-One day, it will be free
-Laughing at my weakness.
-The red is a dab of paint on an empty canvas,
-Will not be stopped by words alone
-Listening to the forlorn howl of failure.
-They tell me it is "only depression."
7) I believe the challenge of this story is to be able great the atmosphere that can communicate the content of story with audiences. I should be clear on the photos and the short text to avoid the feeling of lost from audience side. Also there should be a strong connection between photos.
